Wow. It's really been a while since I updated this, huh?
I wrote some shorts during my silence and completely outlined another reboot of Faerie Story. The first book is detailed down to the scene and while the following two are more broadly plotted. And I'm now eleven thousand words into actually writing said reboot.
Yesterday I wrote 2.5k without breaking a sweat. Today I'm at 998 and exhausted. Part of the difference, I think, is that today's work followed the character with the anxiety disorder. She's just more draining to write than the others, which makes me glad I switched from her being the first-person narrator and am now going with a third person that spends a lot of time focused on other people.
I stand now at 7607 words. It's hard to say what point of the original I'm up to. I added some stuff, including an entire chapter focusing on a character who wasn't in previous versions, but I also cut a bunch. I realized there was a lot in the early chapters that really could be cut, so I've cut it. I am around were I was at the 10688 in the last draft, but I have skipped introducing someone I want introduced, so one of those scenes is going to get added.
In other news... My house is still full of people all day! It adds challenge to the whole getting-into-a-writing-headspace thing. I think having a big project to focus on is going to help me, although I will need to be sure not to be too upset with myself over days when I don't get much if any work done.
At the start of it, I was trying really hard to post a lot of book reviews. That fizzled. I hope to get back to it soon, but only have so much energy.
Then I decided I'd start a new season of Wording Wednesday early. I wrote one week fine but have now spent two weeks on the second prompt and haven't finished it. I'll probably post a new prompt tonight anyway, although the idea of going to look for ne seems somehow depressing.
I do have a project I'm not despondent about, though. Over the last month or so, a slow realization about Faerie Story dawned. I realized that a large part of my struggle with the rewrites came from being locked solely into one character's POV. What, I started to wonder, would happen if I abandoned the first person present tense of my other novels and tried to do this one in third? Using the same omniscient yet focused narration of my recent short stories, I have restarted the novel.
If nothing else, rewriting everything has really helped me see exactly how slow the original opening was. I'm now dropping Interesting Things much earlier, which I hope will help the pacing considerably.
I only started this rewrite a few days ago and I'm not trying to rush with it. I have two full chapters and the start of a third, comping out to just over six thousand words.
I wrote two thousand completely new words today. Chapter Two focuses on a character who wasn't in previous drafts, a barista who is being recruited by the anti-faerie faction. I'm now really tired and realizing I didn't take my ADHD meds this morning. But I feel better about Faerie Story than I have in a long time.
Over the month since I last posted here, I have written several short stories.
The most recent was The Ghost of the Claw Machine, a story that had me returning to the world of Shadow in which my novel I'd Rather Not Be Dead was set. The new narrator (Drew's daughter, perhaps?) works with a new friend to help a ghost move on from Shadow in a tale of sisterly love with a hint of romance.
In Eeshkiks Last Watch a group of aliens just want to slack off and finish their stint monitoring Earth while doing as little work as possible. Unfortunately for them, the humans below have other ideas.
The Queen's Holy Orb features three gnomes, two dogs, and one holy object. When their errand for the church goes sideways thanks to a pair of gigantic canines, a team of delivery gnomes must figure out how to get the blessed orb back so that they can get it to its new home.
With those three entries, I have completed the fourth season of Wording Wednesday. I'm about to start a MasterClass taught by the renowned Margaret Atwood. I'm told it has writing exercises and I will likely be sharing those over on the story blog. I may use this blog to summarize what I learn.
I also wrote a review of The Bedeviled Series by Shani Petroff that you can find on Andy Reads Things. It's a Middle Grade series about the daughter of the devil and the comical mishaps her supernatural powers lead to when she tries to use them to fight against the evil that is middle school. I also read Just Juliet by Charlotte Reagan this week, but haven't gotten the review up for it yet.
I have not worked on Faerie Story at all. I feel I need to fix that. Most of the month thus far has been eaten up by illnesses, mine and those of family members, but I'm hopeful next week is going to look better than recent ones.