Chapter 2 is Thoughtful
Me: So, Chapter 2, I see you adhered to the first 2/3rds of the outline, then decided the rest could be cut.
Chapter 2: Yep.
Me: But the last section was where something actually happens. The first two bits are both summarized as people thinking about stuff.
Chapter 2: And waiting! And also traveling. Traveling is definitely action, if that's what you're getting at.
Me: I guess... But are you sure you're engaging enough?
Chapter 2: I DO end in screaming.
Me: I'm not sure that will save you in the rewrites.
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